But personally I believe a business letter should end with Very truly yours, not Sincerely.
还行,乔治。但是我个人相信一封商业信函应该以“敬上”结尾,而不是“谨启”。
In a few years the small workshop had become a large factory which employed seven hundred and twenty-eight people.
几年之后,小铺子已经发展成了一个雇有728人的大工厂。